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Sunday, 31 October 2010

~~~Love you~~~

This is just a little poem Peter wrote me earlier, that I just HAD to share with everyone. Love you Peter xx


He tell me I am perfect
He tells me I am a God
One would get big headed , I however to not
He says thing like half past and porridge and my heart just start beating
His smile something I could not live without
He is like the sky to me always being there
He will never leave my head
I don’t know how my heart survived this long but it did
Now forever more I have my Jack

12 comments:

Brian said...

I'm getting all choked up...or maybe nauseated, I'm not sure which. It's fun to 'watch' you guys though.

Love<~Peter~> said...

I love how he didnt edit it so you can tell its from me he didnt even edit the color Love<~Peter~>

jaygeemmm said...

@Peter: Well written.

@Jack: Use that Preview Post button! HAHAHAHA!

Peace <3
Jay

Ethan said...

I like it though I think Brian is coming off as an ass.

Any-who take care
Ethan

Brian said...

Sorry, I was trying to be funny.

Micky said...

Brian - too much of Jesse's Pumpkin Pie (all that maple syrup and condensed milk he puts in!).

It's such a lovely thing - love poetry. Thanks for sharing it.

Is the last line true? Do you vow so?

Love<~Peter~> said...

If he will have me I will never hurt him Love<~Peter~>

Jack xx said...

I dont use the preview button, it usualy doesnt need it :P
And i didnt want to change a thing!
Try a different approach Brian? lol but sarcasm fails over blogger :P

And i know it is lovely :) and i couldnt help but publish it ... so expect more :P
I hope so <3

And i will, and i feel the same way. I will never hurt you either <3 xx

Ethan said...

Ok Didn't know you were trying to be funny.
Sorry for calling you an ass

Didn't know Peter was this good of a writer. Now if only he would improve his blogging grammar

Jack xx said...

Haha, dont worry, i'll try my best :P

Oliver said...

woah woah woah!! Okay, so i come back to blogger after 3 weeks *sigh* and see... well all this! omg we have so much to talk about lol

Jack xx said...

Well it serves you right for leaving it so long!! And yes, it can be a lot to take in at once lol
You need to blog more (or keep in contact) or MSN lol we have a lot to talk about :P
Jack xx

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