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Sunday 6 March 2011

End of an Era



I watched you every day.
And I
memorised your hair, your eyes,
Looking the night away.
Painting your face inside my mind,
Hoping never to forget,
Worlds apart and yet so close,
So full of love and regret.

Where is he, n’ where did he go?
Why was he here and then not so?
I’m tearing up my mind, inside.
But time moves on,
And so must we,
The seasons change,
And finally flee.
And like the bluebird,
You sang your song,
Then you fly away,
And you move on.

Looking for answers, but don’t know where,
Just the dark blue sky hanging there,
The wind whistling through the pain,
Just a long, long night with nothing to gain.

Thunderclouds looming overhead,
N’ lightning strikes the ground.
Thunderclouds looming overhead,
N’ a tree falls down.

The dim streets, n’ the dark night,
Shadows moving outa sight,
Broken limbs and a broken heart,
Broken mind, but no re-start.





It still hurts, when I think of you,
It still hurts, to breathe.
It still hurts, when I say your name,
It still hurts, me.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I'm so sorry, Jack. I know it hurts. You know where to find me if you want to talk...

Peace <3
Jay

Wayne said...

Love the depressing Quotes! I feel better already. Of course you know the old saying 'Time heals all wounds' is very true. Getting over a breakup takes a few weeks or months sometimes but you will get over it and be glad you moved on. You now have freedom and OPPORTUNITY! Something rather exciting about that. When one door closes many others can open. Don't sit in your room, get out there and circulate; you might be surprised. bfn - Wayne (hugs)

1q23 said...

There's lots of us been following your adventures and will stick with you now.

Wayne is right! There's lots of opportunities - choose the next one wisely!

For what it might be worth I enjoyed several relationships before I met Pete and we've now been together around ten years and Civil Partners for three. Mind you - we still have our spats and our relationship, though very, very solid underneath, doesn't always look or sound like it!

Enjoy life - it won't treat you well if you don't.

A Wandering Pom said...

Jack

If this means what I think it means, I'm very sorry to hear it. If you want to talk, I'm happy to listen.

*hugs*

Mark

Anonymous said...

I'm sorry, sweetheart... love you. tman<3

Rowan said...

Oh no, i hope this isnt what i think it is.
Although i see no other way to interpret it :(

Stay strong mate, we're all here.

Rowan <3

*big hugs*

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